Comments for Greek Goddess http://goddess14.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Thu, 28 Aug 2008 23:49:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU hourly 1 Comment on Assignment - Second Quarter by drhaisook http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/04/26/assignment-second-quarter/#comment-12 drhaisook Mon, 29 May 2006 22:14:18 +0000 https://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/04/26/assignment-second-quarter/#comment-12 Congrats! You must be very self-confident! Congrats! You must be very self-confident!

]]> Comment on Soccer by drhaisook http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/04/20/soccer/#comment-11 drhaisook Mon, 29 May 2006 00:16:43 +0000 https://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/04/20/soccer/#comment-11 Hmm.. you know what?! I actually LOVE soccer girls! They rock! Esp. when they wear no bras! Just kidding... But really, I see nothing wrong with girls playing soccer. Keep up the habit, and just don't listen to what they're saying. Hmm.. you know what?! I actually LOVE soccer girls! They rock! Esp. when they wear no bras! Just kidding…

But really, I see nothing wrong with girls playing soccer. Keep up the habit, and just don’t listen to what they’re saying.

]]> Comment on Dear diary by ando14 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/02/23/dear-diary/#comment-10 ando14 Thu, 20 Apr 2006 23:08:04 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/02/23/dear-diary/#comment-10 nice millie i luv ya dont eva 4get that luv lisa nice millie i luv ya dont eva 4get that luv lisa

]]> Comment on Dolly website by schnookiputtzi http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/28/dolly-website/#comment-9 schnookiputtzi Thu, 06 Apr 2006 23:17:14 +0000 https://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/28/dolly-website/#comment-9 AGGGH so do i!!! i love this site it is awsum!!! We can be like twins!!!:p just kidding!!!! Nah u have good taste i love this site it rocks my world and the magazine is soo coooool!!! :D luv maddi xOXOx AGGGH so do i!!! i love this site it is awsum!!! We can be like twins!!!:p just kidding!!!! Nah u have good taste i love this site it rocks my world and the magazine is soo coooool!!! :D luv maddi xOXOx

]]> Comment on Poem by mrbartlett http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/09/poem/#comment-8 mrbartlett Sun, 26 Mar 2006 05:52:24 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/09/poem/#comment-8 Good work A, you've understood the format of a free verse poem and used it to tell a clear story. You could look at where you've put some of your line breaks (some of the lines could be a bit shorter) and I feel the second last line could be a little more powerful. Also, you could use some 'feeling' or 'sensual' words to allow the reader to feel like they really are at the beach. Is it hot? What does it smell like (salt/sunscreen etc.)? Is the water cold? Can you hear seagulls? etc. It's very nice though... and sad. Good work A, you’ve understood the format of a free verse poem and used it to tell a clear story. You could look at where you’ve put some of your line breaks (some of the lines could be a bit shorter) and I feel the second last line could be a little more powerful. Also, you could use some ‘feeling’ or ’sensual’ words to allow the reader to feel like they really are at the beach. Is it hot? What does it smell like (salt/sunscreen etc.)? Is the water cold? Can you hear seagulls? etc. It’s very nice though… and sad.

]]> Comment on by schnookiputtzi http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/01/10/#comment-7 schnookiputtzi Thu, 09 Mar 2006 22:56:15 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/01/10/#comment-7 HOT HOT HOT u rock keep da hot ppl comin! Luv Maddi Moo xOXOx HOT HOT HOT u rock keep da hot ppl comin! Luv Maddi Moo xOXOx

]]> Comment on Poem by spe0011 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/09/poem/#comment-6 spe0011 Thu, 09 Mar 2006 22:55:59 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/09/poem/#comment-6 great poem! great poem!

]]> Comment on Poem by drinkh2o http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/09/poem/#comment-5 drinkh2o Thu, 09 Mar 2006 22:52:54 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/09/poem/#comment-5 aww, very sad.... nice poem/song though aww, very sad…. nice poem/song though

]]> Comment on by legs http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/01/10/#comment-4 legs Wed, 01 Mar 2006 00:12:14 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/01/10/#comment-4 Ewww meliaaaa ewww ewwwwy bahaha loveyou. Ewww meliaaaa ewww ewwwwy
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]]> Comment on by time2fly http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/01/10/#comment-3 time2fly Wed, 01 Mar 2006 00:06:47 +0000 http://goddess14.wordpress.com/2006/03/01/10/#comment-3 2 of the hottest guys 2 walk the planet!! good choice!! 2 of the hottest guys 2 walk the planet!! good choice!!

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